The Bishop's Generosity

Mar 5 2008  | Views 235 |  Comments  (20)
The Bishop’s Generosity People in the story 1. David-The bishop 2. Sheela-The bishop’s m... Expand

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  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

Thanks very much.
I'll try to make it into a play. But I don't have many friends in school. I've showed some of my stories to my teacher, and she read it out to the class.



  g_madhuri posted 5 mnths ago

Hey Atishay,

Great story. Very well written can be made into a play. May be you can get a group of students in school and make it into a play. Try it out. It will be a big hit :-)

I really like your tone when you say in the comments that your next story is going to be much better. Good :-) Never loose that confidence in yourself.

Cheers,
Madhuri



  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

Thanks very much
i'm happy that you enjoyed it.


And I'm also happy that you've read both my stories. But my next one's gonna be much better.



  ShobanaSundar posted 5 mnths ago

Atishay You write beautifuuly. Your story has a nice flow and you seem to take the reader with you. loved your secret door story too. Keep writing.



  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

I'll try to put it on display. And thanks for asking.



  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

Thanks very much

I
'm happy that you liked it. My next one's gonna be much better. I hope you'll enjoy that one too. Thanks again and good luck for yours as well.



  Kasang posted 5 mnths ago

Hi Atishay...dude...this was a rocking story....was getting mixed up while reading......had read something of the sort! 

Waiting for your next one!

Kasang



  sophizz posted 5 mnths ago

Atishay why dont you put you picture in the display...
i wanna see you man!



  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

No, I write stories on holidays like saturdays or sundays. Or I write when I come back from school.



  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

Thanks very much
I happy that you enjoyed it





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