I'm bored

Jan 20 2008  | Views 881 |  Comments  (16)
I’m bored Once upon a time there lived a boy named Jackson. He was 9 years old. There... Expand

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  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

Thanks very much
Your's was the longest comment that i have ever got, but also the most satisfying.

I'm 10 years old.

And I love cavin too.

Thanks again and good luck for your stories as well



  g_madhuri posted 5 mnths ago

Helloooo Atishay,

Welcome to Sulekha. 

And you dont sound at all like a kid :-) I guess you should be getting irritated when everybody is addressing as one ????

Secondly, nice story very well written and I checked all the comments and more importantly your responses. Once again how old are you??????

Calvin haan? I love Calvin. Very cool dude. My son is 3 1/2 and he started showing me some of Calvin's deeds :-)))

Your writing skills are really good and even better are your responses to the comments. Will go and read the 2nd one.

Keep dreaming :-)

Cheers,
Madhuri



  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

Thanks very much
And I'm posting another story, which would be quite same. I'll try using your part in that one. And by the way it's not so bad.
Thanks again



  atims posted 5 mnths ago

oh, I believe you completely! I wish he could find a way in which he could keep visiting the magical world off and on, when he got bored of reality....
That's a nice story, son. Now let me go check out ur other story...



  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

Thanks very much
I also dream a lot. I'm happy that your reading my stories. And it's true, we should be careful while wishing because they just might come true. Thanks again



  Kasang posted 5 mnths ago

Hi Atishay

Lovely story!! I believe you.....it can happen.....I used to dream, well....still do....lot of stuff that others dont believe in!! Very nicely written...and you have put the point across so neatly...one shud wish wisely...and all our wishes, even if they come true, might not be that great!!

Keep writing, dude...you are good!

Kasang



  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

Thanks very much
This story is especially for kids.
Maybe you can tell this story to your kids



  seeingeye posted 5 mnths ago

Atishay

Only brainless people get bored....(i tell that to my sons everytime they say 'I am bored")!!! ofcourse it is not true
I loved the story, very smart kid, figured out for himself that all play can be very boring too!!!



  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

Thank's very much
I'm glad you enjoyed my story. I'm trying harder to write better and better storie's. My next one's gonna be much better



  atishaysamuel posted 5 mnths ago

Thanks very much
I wrote this story starring Calvin. And Calvin's my favorite kiddo to.





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